Some people believe that the most important aspect of their job is their salary. Others think that the job itself is the most important. What do you think is the most important aspect of a job? Include specific details and examples to support your choice.
Most of the part of world is full of middle class families where educated man or women works for their own family. These most of common people works as an employe in small or big companies. For them job is everything because of salary. I believe that most important aspect of job is salary only.
To embark on, in the justification of my notion, There are so less people who thinks out of the box and start their own business but some people won't able to take that much risk and end by taking secure job or corporate job because it offers stability in continuous income and low risk of loosing job. Even though work is not in favour of them, common people won't complaint about it because they have to take care of their families. However, there are so less chances that people gets job whatever they like but most of them doing for money by working laboriously. Hence salary is more important than work we are doing because leader of family is having all responsibility of family on his shoulder. He needs to take care of his son, his education, health of individuals etc. For all of these money is major aspect.
However, some might disagree about it because they think person cannot perform well until they do job from their heart. When person gets a job of their liking they can give outstanding outcomes, for them job is far more important because they can implement their ideas or innovations. They are getting respect in their field.
In a nutshell, I agree that salary is most important in our middle class family but we need to find best suited job for us, so we can also able to work with vim and zeal. However, people also need to take risk and think out of box, have audacity to build own business where you can showcase your skills and also earn for family.
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..., health of individuals etc. For all of these money is major aspect. However, some mi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51851851852 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26780033983 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512345679012 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.9847120341 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33443081971 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125943130847 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0960450355658 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221606559362 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643186354756 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.