The charts give information about two genres of TV programmes watched by men and women and four different age groups in Australia.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar graph represents several age groups, men and women in Australia country who watch reality shows and games shows on tv.
Firstly, around more than 60% of men watch game shows than reality shows which accounts for approximately 36%. whereas, women has greater interest in reality shows which is less below than 70%. it is more than any other age group in reality shows graph. but also women watched game shows almost same as men which is around less below than 60%
Secondly, age group which is 16-24 and more than 45 has similar interest about both tv shows which is 51% and 69% respectively. moreover, age group of 25-34 is more inclined towards reality shows(60%) than game shows(39%) and age group of 35-44 is inclined towards reality show(68%) than game shows(41%)
In a nutshell, male and female, different age groups has their own different interest about the tv programs but this interest also changes when age changes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Whereas
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...ity shows which is less below than 70%. it is more than any other age group in rea...
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Suggestion: But
...other age group in reality shows graph. but also women watched game shows almost sa...
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Suggestion: Moreover
...hows which is 51% and 69% respectively. moreover, age group of 25-34 is more inclined to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 33.7804878049 41% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 796.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.975 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23186266099 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 94.141294517 43.030603864 219% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 132.666666667 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6666666667 5.23603664747 223% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154112507852 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0907379492424 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460050261224 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1191665527 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329932603596 0.0819641961636 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 40.7170731707 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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