There are many people who think we have diverse options to choose at the present time. I completely agree with this statement that is probably stemmed from recent advances in information technology and people’s expectation and also I will explain my opinion in this essay.
On the one hand, because of the incredibly speed in inventing and producing digital systems and equipment the 21 century is called the information age. The vivid example of this issue is the increasing social applications and TV channels that has overwhelmed people comparing the past time. They give people this opportunity to select different types of application for connecting, while there was were limited options such as telephone or letter for contacting in the ancient.
On the other hand, there is no doubt that people in the modern era has have high intelligence and they always have made an effort or tend to find a way for having healthier and more convenient lifestyle. Therefore, this trend gives them many chances to select why you have mentioned this. As an example, for commuting or travelling, people can opt variety type of public and private vehicles that individuals choose them according to their conditions. It comes from diversity-seeking part of human’s personality and people’s expectations that force them to find a new way.
To sum up, I firmly agree that revolutionary advancement in modern technology and the exacti, which is an inner characteristic of human give them this opportunity to have many items for choosing many available options in different aspects of their lives.
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- Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is positive or negative development? 78
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Suggestion: pastime
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
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Message: Use past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...doubt that people in the modern era has have high intelligence and they always have ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, while, no doubt, such as, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23255813953 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02303716164 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608527131783 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.9563809738 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.0 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212889255856 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876158998646 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591507016392 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135773975576 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528057249357 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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