Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
Many people think that, these days human kind have much more variety of choices than before. However, others oppose this point of view. This essay will take a closer look at the matter, giving fair reasons to support it.
On the one hand it is true to say that there are factors leading to think that the society live now with far more opportunities choosing what ever they want. First, there has been made a recent research of how people lived before and nowadays and it is proved that current live it gives us a lot more option. Here some example, years ago when the women had the right only to stay at home to take care of the children and household and a man to work only in the country where he lives. Second, again the women will be mentioned here that, they had not any choice of what to study or how far they can further their education, whereas, men had the chance to choose any subject which they would like to study. Third Also for those who would like to choose to buy a second property, they would not be allowed because of the law. Hence, it is because of the lack of different choices.
On the other hand, the fore mentioned might not be completely true. One, even in the past where people believed that there was not a significant variety of choices still they had. Two, opportunities for deciding what to choose there always was, then and now, just choices were not discovered yet.
In conclusion, there are evidences proving that claims are true, yet I am inclined to agree with the first one mentioned.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 186, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'recent research'.
Suggestion: recent research
...r they want. First, there has been made a recent research of how people lived before and nowadays...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, look, second, so, still, then, third, whereas, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1253.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.475 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15010381809 2.80592935109 77% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614285714286 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4416320532 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3846153846 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53846153846 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101483177522 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0347701770898 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497866574671 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0520416989025 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336899511571 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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