Some people believe that in order to give opportunities to new generations companies should encourage high level employees who are older than 55 to retire.
Do you agree or disagree?
In contemporary society, it is generally believed that senior employees who are older than 55 should leave their positions so that younger generations can have better employment and promotion opportunities. Personally, I strongly disagree with this statement.
For a variety of reasons, it would be ineffective for a company’s development if their employees take early retirement. Since these personnel become old hands at their works, they have accumulated a massive amount of experience and relevant skills to the fields. However, it may take a lot of time for young people to master their skills and such mastery sometimes sounds impossible for some people. Therefore, encouraging senior workers to retire early can be a waste of grey matter and shows careless plans for human resources.
Apart from the abovementioned practical concerns, it would be better for the employees in terms of both mental and physical health if they are not forced to take early retirement. When the age of retirement is shortened, people tend to be more anxious about their future and how they can make a living after retirement. As a result, they tend to work harder and are willing to work overtime to earn more savings. Such excessive working pressure will definitely have detrimental impacts on their health in a long run as well as increase their levels of stress.
Taking everything into consideration, this reinforces my perspective that over-55-year-old employees should not be subjected to early retirement. This decision can be a huge loss to the company and cause anxiety among the labour force.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this personnel' or 'these personnels'?
Suggestion: this personnel; these personnels
... employees take early retirement. Since these personnel become old hands at their works, they h...
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Line 7, column 237, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d cause anxiety among the labour force.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, therefore, well, apart from, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26953125 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01893994857 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62109375 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8747097167 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.416666667 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132900815637 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047637282764 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541758490081 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951296952604 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0701123994908 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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