Some people believe that parents should devote more time helping their children with schoolwork. Others think that they should allocate more time to playing sports with their kids. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is a common belief that children should be supported with homework by their parents. However, I firmly reckon that parents had better spend their own time playing sports with their children in order to tighten their relationships.
On the one hand, students should be given instructions by their parents when doing homework. Since children are assigned a reservoir of exercises including various subjects, parental support is strongly necessary. That parents help their children resolve problematic assignment leads to admiration of children.As a result, children will make effortd to be as proficient as their parents, which improves their academic results considerably.
Nevertheless, I support the idea that parents should contribute more time to playing sports with their children. When playing sports, children are encouraged to be more independent so that they can enhance numerous life skills. Additionally, the relationship between parents and kids is more and more bonding as well as attachable through teammate communication. A recent published study illustrates that children’sensitive and embarrassing moments are far more easily expressed once they are in a comfortable environment. Accordingly parents can not only perceive their kids’problems but they also can stimulate to orient their children’s personality.
To sum up, while it is apparent that parental support has significant impacts on children’study results, it is undeniable that parents had better play sports with their children willingly so as to improve health and also to foster open communication and closer relationships between them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...ignment leads to admiration of children.As a result, children will make effortd to...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Accordingly,
... they are in a comfortable environment. Accordingly parents can not only perceive their kid...
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Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ay sports with their children willingly so as to improve health and also to foster open ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, well, while, as to, as a result, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.80833333333 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30588700486 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8120351221 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.727272727 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8181818182 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.90909090909 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400562053554 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176111667482 0.084324248473 209% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104556449184 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261338066073 0.151304729494 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0932558233987 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.42 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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