Some people believe that parents should devote more time to helping their children with schoolwork. Others think that they should allocate more time to playing sports with their kids. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, the advertising industry has grown at a rapid speed in many countries because it offers several benefits. However, it is usually said that advertising has deleteriously affected our lives. although I concede that advertising has badly affected our lives, I personally do not reckon that all of the impacts are negative.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that advertising has some disadvantages. firstly, customers can't confirm the quality of the products. They can be easily taken in by several companies which have written wrong information. secondly, because of benefits, some famous stars make use of their numerous fans to advertise poor-quality products. For example, a well-known model in Vietnam was sued by fans in court for advertising inferior beauty products leading to the cause of serious effects on clients' skin.
On the other hand, I would side with those who believe that advertising has positive impacts on our lives. firstly, advertising has contributed to the growth of many companies. Thanks to the advertisements, countless products have been bought by many potential which helps companies to expand their market and gain lots of profits. Moreover, numerous people will be employed to work in marketing so as to further the expansion of advertising. This has greatly reduced the number of unemployment in the world. secondly, advertising provides inhabitants with information about different products on the market. it helps them to make decisions about what is best for them. For example, if an advertisement says that it's suitable for dry skin, customers may take it into account whether to purchase it or not.
In conclusion, although advertising brings some nuisance, I firmly believe that its advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43165467626 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04608088659 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604316546763 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5667031444 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8235294118 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3529411765 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58823529412 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0750812279823 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0245310722605 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0283140985768 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0441637192143 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293969131865 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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