Some people believe that a person’s intelligence is inherited from the parents, while others believe that their environment is the main factor. Discuss these views. Which factor do you think is mostly responsible for intelligence?
It is still widely debated topic whether cognitive abilities depends on genetics or environment is a big factor of developing intelligence. The are arguments on both sides that I will discuss now.
On the one hand, according to genetics, most of the features of the parents are inherited by children. In genetics theory, the cognitive abilities of the children are inherited especially from the mother. Thus, the mother plays a key role in developing intelligence of fetus, as pregnancy period of mother is the start of growing intelligence in kid. For example if intelligent mother previously spent her time on reading at her leisure time, without any negative destructions as bad habits, there is more probability that embrion to be born with ameliorated cognitive abilities.
Conversely, supporters of the social sciences believe intelligence is a soft skill that can be advanced depending on society and living conditions. In urban areas, city dwellers face complex issues that are intended to be solved on a daily basis rather than in countryside. For instance, city dwellers face challenges as contaminations, congestions; time scheduling that enables them to solve complex issues that directly involves intelligence level. Furthermore, intelligence level depends on education background whether a person possess high school education in combination with advanced studies as bachelor or other degree. Hence, the more person invested its time on education, learning new languages, the more intelligent he seems to be appear in the future.
Overall, I believe environmental factors oversights genetics factors as more opportunities are available to master the intelligence but it is also crucial for mother to preserve.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, furthermore, hence, if, so, still, thus, well, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54716981132 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16242175498 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607547169811 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8630733331 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.5 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.91666666667 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221692688554 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750419188537 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500970036992 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134892061842 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510938472109 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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