Some people believe that personal happiness is directly related to economic success, while others argue that happiness depends on other factors. Discuss both viewpoints and state your point of view.
These days, the municipal pace of life put citizens under heavy pressure stem from the overweight workload and financial problems which lead to materialistic society. As a consequence, a part of them thinks that individual happiness comes from a wealthy situation directly. Stand in my view, I believe that a happy life include many main elements like tighten relationship, stable economy and job satisfaction.
On the one hand, undoubtedly, money plays a vital role in individual life. Firstly, money is essential for all of the basic necessaries, survival things to stay in the contemporary world. Money could not buy all of thing but it could supply a luxurious lifestyle, a spacious apartment and mouth-watering dishes and branded clothes which are indispensable for a happy life. Secondly, high-classes have precious time to experience appealing colour life by over-sea occasion and discover unspoiled lands that bring joy and chance to broaden their horizon.
On the other hand, there will always be a lot of reasons that make you happy in lieu of money such as having new friends or completing their dream job. As the matter of fact, people always prioritize health as a crucial part of their life, obviously, If you stay lifelong healthy, you will have more opportunities to experience the diversity of the world and enjoy all interesting things. Nobody wants to trade their health for becoming a millionaire and spend all of their time in the health-care centre. Moreover, there are a ton of people feel happy to follow their dream work with full of passion and consider it as the only task of their life which could make their happy and meet job satisfaction without handsome salary.
In conclusion, because of many aforementioned reasons, to have long-term happiness, people should maintain between making money and other vital elements.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a crucial part of their life, obviously, If you stay lifelong healthy, you will h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15946843854 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88465085975 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611295681063 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.8974551461 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.416666667 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0833333333 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108536533062 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0406414128254 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407256983227 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0667988884294 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261857193795 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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