Some people believe that preserving natural environment is crucial, however, most make no effort to do so. Why do you think this is happening? What are some simple actions that could help the environment?
A few people think that it is vital to preserve natural environment. Whereas, many do not attempt to take any action to save the nature. There are many reasons why this is happening such as poor knowledge and education, lack of social responsibilities and no rule to curb such actions. All this can be solved by simple steps such as education, increase awareness about responsibilities and strict laws.
The reason why many people do not try to prevent environmental damages is a multi factorial issue. The lack of knowledge and education is the primary reason and many do not know what kind of damage they are causing to the environment by not knowing its impacts for example, wasting water or using plastic which cannot be recycled. The second reason is that many of us do not show any interest in social activities such as working with non-governmental organisation to clear unwanted waste or prevent pollution by using public transports. Lastly, many countries have no rules or laws to protect the environment.
Some simple solutions can bring about major change in avoiding environmental damage. Educating every person in a society about the environment is most important. Preventing people from producing waste or pollution by simply engaging every one is some sort of social work in the field of environment preservation. Every nation should enact stringent laws to prevent pollution, environmental damage and recycling.
To conclude, it is very important to preserve and prevent environment and nature, and most of the people do not participate to achieve it. There are many reason which prevent them in doing so. This could be prevented by education to increase awareness, social work to improve responsibility for everyone, and strict laws that could punish people who do not follow.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 70, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... vital to preserve natural environment. Whereas, many do not attempt to take any action...
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Line 3, column 332, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...using plastic which cannot be recycled. The second reason is that many of us do not...
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Line 7, column 150, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'many reasons'.
Suggestion: many reasons
...ot participate to achieve it. There are many reason which prevent them in doing so. This co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
lastly, second, so, whereas, for example, kind of, sort of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15358361775 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98419229841 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529010238908 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1597546006 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.666666667 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5333333333 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46666666667 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270904680349 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949816327715 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506588126699 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165745230474 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044118062271 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.