In this contemporary time, technology has become a vital element to enhance our life style being comfortable and efficient. However, there are still those who opine that technology create a wide gap between poor and affluent people, while others argue that this trend can bridge that gap. This essay will examine both views of this phenomenon before reaching a concrete conclusion.
It is visible to see why there are aảguments about technology widens the gap of social status. To begin with, most technical devices are affordable just for wealthy people, in addition that the companies manufacturing use numerous modern technical machines, therefore they have to raise the products prices which is adequate to the manufacturing scales. As a result, low-income people are incapable to take advantage of those devices. Another reason is that by effortlessly approaching to technology, affluent individuals can gain enormour merits at work whereas the opposite is true with poverties which results in losing their positions of employment, consequently becoming poorer. For example, tremendous works require the use of technology that high-income people can acquire, while the basic salary for manual workers has stopped rising recently.
However, there are still proofs that technology reduces the gap between impoverished and affluent people. It can bring more career opportunities for employees, which had never been existed in the past as service sector or telecommunication. Moreover, undoubtedly, technical devices can solve many problems existed in their daily life, like purifying water without electricity or inexpensive transportation. As a consequence, low-paid people will not have to worry much about their cost of living like ever before.
To sum up everything that has been stated so far, i believe that rather than causing disadvantages to the social gap, technology can narrow it and improve life quality for the poor by producing more job positions and inventions which can tackle numerous problems for them.
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...everything that has been stated so far, i believe that rather than causing disadv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, whereas, while, for example, in addition, as a result, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1724.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54340836013 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95613306837 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630225080386 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.6765123484 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.615384615 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9230769231 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6153846154 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153057159876 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544165684367 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039626379821 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0867679856619 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0179149165344 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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