Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas
others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children.
Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.
Many people suggest governments should allocate their budget from taxes to healthcare services while
others believe some other important fields should be more well-funded. Both sides of this argument will
be discussed in my essay below.
On the one hand, healthcare is essential for the well-being of people in a country as a whole. In fact,
greater governments' funding in improving medical utilities would ensure the safety of the citizens of
that country in the event of traffic accidents or natural calamities. Furthermore, the threat from fatal
contagions, Ebola for example, puts a huge strain on medical systems. An enormous amount of state
money, therefore, is required for establishing research as well as experiment facilities to find new cures
for those diseases.
On the other hand, other sectors such as education and technology are also factored in boosting the
nationwide economy. Firstly, education is the key to having a better future generation. With more state
money for classroom modernization and teacher training, public schools and institutions can provide
practical knowledge to young people who will contribute back to the development of their country.
Secondly, governments should focus their investments on technological innovation as well. It is
apparent that modern technology is indispensable in this industrialized world since human labor is
incomparable with that of machinery in terms of efficiency. Thus, an emphasis should be placed on this
area to benefit the overall growth of the economy.
In conclusion, I would argue that not only healthcare but also other determinants like education and
technology should simultaneously receive the same government’s financial support.
- Topic: In some countries, some high school leavers are choosing to work or travel for a periodof time before going to university. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of those schoolleavers’ decision. Give your own opinion. 61
- Some people think that the best way to run a business is within the family What are the advantages and disadvantages of a family run business 87
- Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereasothers argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children.Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion. 78
- Being a celebrity- such as a famous film star or sports personality- brings problems as well as benefits.Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems? 11
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69731800766 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15277017517 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63601532567 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1825915677 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.384615385 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8461538462 7.06120827912 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.38176352705 411% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151311748254 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510602794623 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435452868573 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0432793495299 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391500855386 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.78 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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