Some people believe that sport competitions are a source of emotional stress for young people. Therefore, youth should be banned from participating in sport competitions. Do you agree or disagree?
Sporting events play a significant role in a youth's life, be health or career, sports has always been fruitful. Sporting events has undergone umpteenth success stories, stories of converting raw talents into legend of the game. Presently, it has been a burning issue whether youth should participate in sports competition or not? Here, I will discord with the given statement.
Multifarious points are there to shore up my point of view. First and foremost, sporting events play paramount role to develop any player into a professional player. To be specific, competitions usually put players into immense pressure situation, winning by coming out of such situations boost the self confidence of any player which further helps any player to shine at international level.
Further emphasising on my point of view, Sporting events are the best source to demonstrate the skills of a player that he/she posses. To illustrate, players try to perform by going out of their skin in competitions in order to prove themselves as a convincing player by securing win. In this rate-race of winning, skills of a player comes to an exposure. Adding to it, competition is best platform for a youth to learn the spirit of fraternity. For instance, competitions undergo several ups and downs, at times players help each other and even after match, winning players usually seems to be consoling the defeated players which urges the spirit of brotherhood in any player. On contrary, others have conflicting views.
They believe that, sometime competition put players under great deal of pressure, pressure of proving themselves as promising player, pressure of meeting their parents expectations which usually ruin some players career when they end up as loosing side. What is more, competitions have noticeably been playing with the health of players. To reveal, players often try to train themselves at next level and usually get hurt in process of doing so. It can spell permanent exit of promising players to
To recapitulate, sporting competitions are the key to build any player into a veteran and a professional player. Hence, I strongly believe that competitions ought to be held In order to transform a simple player into a full packaged veteran
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'youths'' or 'youth's'?
Suggestion: youths'; youth's
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Suggestion: Further,
...er to shine at international level. Further emphasising on my point of view, Sporti...
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: to
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'hence', 'if', 'so', 'for instance', 'what is more']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.255583126551 0.247107183377 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.196029776675 0.155533422707 126% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0694789081886 0.0946595960268 73% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0446650124069 0.0501214627716 89% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0347394540943 0.0437548338989 79% => OK
Prepositions: 0.131513647643 0.122226691241 108% => OK
Participles: 0.0744416873449 0.0403226058552 185% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.86518329653 2.80594681477 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0471464019851 0.0326793684256 144% => OK
Particles: 0.00496277915633 0.00163938923432 303% => OK
Determiners: 0.0769230769231 0.0861772015684 89% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00992555831266 0.021408717616 46% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0124069478908 0.011925033212 104% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2239.0 1933.35771543 116% => OK
No of words: 363.0 316.048096192 115% => OK
Chars per words: 6.16804407713 6.12580529183 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20517956788 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.410468319559 0.374742101984 110% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.308539944904 0.28420135186 109% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.184573002755 0.203846283523 91% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.137741046832 0.137316102897 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86518329653 2.80594681477 102% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.037074148 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556473829201 0.56093040696 99% => OK
Word variations: 62.1770491933 60.7387585426 102% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0891783567 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.1666666667 20.7743622355 97% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1672565889 49.517814964 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.388888889 127.492653851 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1666666667 20.7743622355 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.333333333333 0.814263465372 41% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 3.99599198397 100% => OK
Readability: 51.020661157 49.1944974215 104% => OK
Elegance: 1.67567567568 1.69124875643 99% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151966438752 0.332605444948 46% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0841854056969 0.102741220458 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0688843653872 0.0668466124924 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.528238748771 0.534860350844 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.16732500564 0.148594505496 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611473981408 0.134430193775 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0335360663562 0.0742795772207 45% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.28280661745 0.324371583561 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.157966752624 0.0638462369009 247% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0994400008138 0.228012699653 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0213438273313 0.058150111329 37% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.68436873747 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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