Some people believe that sport is an essential part of school life for children, while others feet it should be purely optional. Discuss these opposing view and give your own opinion. You should give reasons for your answer, and include ideas and example from your own knowledge and experience.
The sport continues to be a controversial topic in the school curriculum, just as a sport itself has become a controversial industry in some respects. There are some valid opinions on both side, which I consider now
On the one hand, some people feel that sport uses up time which better spent on academic subjects such as exam preparation. Moreover, it said that it is unwise to force children to do activities, which they have no interest in them. Finally, there are question marks over the wholesomeness of sport itself, with drugging and corruption scandals increasingly common, as we see in football at present. So some people believe that this lack of morals sets a poor example to youngsters.
On the other hand, a significant benefit of the sport is that it helps children's physical development at the vital stage. Furthermore, the supporters of school sport emphasize the importance of team building in sports, such as football or basketball, which often helped to be excellent preparation for adulthood. Finally, many people feel that a competitive spirit, so important today, that is fostered by sports at an early age. It is notable, for example, that many successful business people excelled in school sport.
Overall, I feel that sport should be compulsory for school children because of the positive effect on their mental and physical development outweighs the negatives. As long as a wide range of sports choices gave to children, to ensure their interest is high, and that sports industry itself maintains the highest standards of conduct.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for example, i feel, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10546875 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87879494357 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5859375 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8248029961 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.818181818 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2727272727 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.90909090909 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212965933575 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830912457732 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434698493091 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127337715998 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259700548426 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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