Some people believe that sport has an important role in society. Others, however, feel that it is nothing more than a leisure activity for some people. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Many people argue over whether sports are merely pastimes, while others believe that these activities play a crucial role in human development. In my opinion, sports and games are as trivial pursuits, primarily meant for leisure, but playing sports regularly is associated with better physical and mental health and contributes to boosting performance at work.
On the one hand, many think that sports have a minor role in their lives because they tend to focus on other aspects of life that they deem more important. For example, many Vietnamese people believe that sports play a minor role in their life because they place greater importance on other aspects. Like many adults, they decide to spend most of his time to work and earning money, reserving physical activities for their precious moments of free time. It is clear that playing sports consumes too much time which can be better used for work.
On the other hand, involvement in sports keeps the mind sharp and invigorated, fostering mental alertness and freshness. That is why many successful business figures, no matter how hectic their schedules may be, still adhere to regular exercise routines. For instance, recent research has demonstrated that individuals who regularly engage in activities like chess, tennis, swimming, and volleyball tend to be healthier and more active than those who lead a sedentary lifestyle. Clearly, participating in sports contributes significantly to a person's overall well-being.
In conclusion, as the reasons mentioned above, i believe that engaging in various forms of physical activities is essential for everyone. These activities not only contribute to physical and mental strength but also play a pivotal role in leading a happy and fulfilling.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 542, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a person' or simply 'persons'?
Suggestion: a person; persons
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, still, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35018050542 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75531450209 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602888086643 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1034063592 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.5 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0833333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219362053512 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832638702509 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598072347131 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134957614508 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372805320469 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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