Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People divide their opinion regarding whether teenagers should hold down a job after graduating from high school or keep on studying further. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument before explaining my perspective on the matter which is that going to college or university is the better option.
On the one hand, working straight after high school is beneficial for undergraduates in some ways. To begin with, they could earn money on their own as well as live independently without being supported by their parents. As a result, the youth not only lessen their parents’ financial burdens but also is more self-sufficient by having the ability to afford their living. Furthermore, having started their career early, they will have the opportunity to fulfill practical experiences as well as inquire vocational skills that are related to their chosen professions. This may bring out a good chance to enhance themselves or get promoted to higher positions.
On the other hand, there are a variety of reasons why people have a tendency of choosing to study further. First of all, academic qualifications are required in several professions. To illustrate, master degree is the minimum diploma for high-paid occupations such as doctors, engineers, business analysts. Moreover, the labor market has become increasingly competitive, and there could be hundreds of applicants for the same position in a company. Indeed, the one who does not have requisite qualifications may have difficulty in competing with their rivals.
In conclusion, I believe both sides of the argument have their own validity. However, on balance, I believe that studying at university or college is essential for undergraduates as this route tends to be more potential and prospective for youngsters to become successful in their careers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
... to become successful in their careers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31724137931 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02157127742 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610344827586 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3810927671 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.142857143 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5 7.06120827912 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190723463184 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596775115523 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652506263727 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126563222292 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0807990993003 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.