Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
To some people, the best way to have a successful career is being academic graduate. However, others opine that it’s more beneficial to just start working right after high school. Personally, I think it has more advantages to attend in a university or college. In this essay, I’ll explain the importance of both views and give my opinion.
To commence with, although there are still a lot of difficulties if someone jumps up into workforce after school, but the clearest benefit we can see is that students know the value of money and can save money for themselves instead of spending it. Unless you are offered a full scholarship, going to college will costs a lot money. That means you need to have a strong financial support. But if you have a job, then you can have money to take care for yourself and family. In addition, you can buy things you want and you own your personal economy. Moreover, earning money by ourselves promotes our higher ambitions in the job. A report showed that almost high school-age students get a well-paid job after high school. But it doesn’t ensure you can get along with that job or have enough patience to continue.
On the other hand, I think universities and colleges are the better way to become successful. At college or university, you will have chance to gain real skills in specific fields and the opportunities for job in the future is wider. First, more schools are now encouraging students to join internships or work experience sections to enhance their knowledge, learn soft skills and boost confidence or maybe find your interests. One more point to remember is that students can work part-time jobs while studying, so they can have fund to pay for things and they learn how to manage time properly. All of these elements are a strong background for students, they are almost fully prepared at the university to be ready for the job in future. Second, college and university increase the opportunities for jobs after graduating academy. There are many jobs require college degree, depending on positions you wish, you need to have certain type of degree. A report gave information that the overall unemployment of the USA was 6,7% while this rate was 4.7% for those with a bachelor’s degree. This reminds having a degree gives you a competitive advantage against other applicants.
To sum up, each point of view provides different advantages and everyone chooses any path that they feel is the best for themselves to head to success. In some aspects, they are more likely to be successful in their career if they study at universities or colleges.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 316, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'cost'
Suggestion: cost
...full scholarship, going to college will costs a lot money. That means you need to hav...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 708, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...most fully prepared at the university to be ready for the job in future. Second, ...
^^
Line 4, column 731, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...the university to be ready for the job in future. Second, college and university increas...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 1103, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[1]
Message: Verbs 'advise' and 'remind' are used with infinitive: 'to have'.
Suggestion: to have
... with a bachelor’s degree. This reminds having a degree gives you a competitive advant...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ve advantage against other applicants. To sum up, each point of view provides ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, still, then, well, while, i think, in addition, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2166.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 446.0 315.596192385 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85650224215 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66841766867 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 176.041082164 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551569506726 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 677.7 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1279288215 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1739130435 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3913043478 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5652173913 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 8.67935871743 219% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23046092638 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704494926323 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048628642193 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154567284454 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046625801335 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 316, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'cost'
Suggestion: cost
...full scholarship, going to college will costs a lot money. That means you need to hav...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 708, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...most fully prepared at the university to be ready for the job in future. Second, ...
^^
Line 4, column 731, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...the university to be ready for the job in future. Second, college and university increas...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 1103, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[1]
Message: Verbs 'advise' and 'remind' are used with infinitive: 'to have'.
Suggestion: to have
... with a bachelor’s degree. This reminds having a degree gives you a competitive advant...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ve advantage against other applicants. To sum up, each point of view provides ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, still, then, well, while, i think, in addition, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2166.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 446.0 315.596192385 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85650224215 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66841766867 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 176.041082164 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551569506726 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 677.7 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1279288215 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1739130435 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3913043478 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5652173913 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 8.67935871743 219% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23046092638 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704494926323 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048628642193 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154567284454 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046625801335 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.