Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people think a university education is the best direction to a prospering career; however, others presume that working straight after high school is a better option. From my perspective, studying at university is my preference as it is a crucial contribution to a person's skills.
On the one hand, attending university contributes to a worker's expertise and increases the rate of job acceptance. First, a proper university education provides students with specialized knowledge. Thus, undergraduates can strengthen the foundation of their major field of study to deal with difficulties at work. For example, 70% of the US officers who attended university, found malfunction less stressful as they developed solutions to problems since university. Moreover, a university certificate precipitates the chances of a well-paid job as companies prioritize workers with compulsory skills. For instance, 60% of Vietnamese corporations prefer workers who have university certificates to uneducated ones.
On the other hand, a job straight after high school helps people make money earlier than university attendees as they do not need to study. For example, a manicurist is profitable for many people as they do not need a university certificate but can still earn money. Furthermore, working without a university could develop new skills for people as they work different jobs to make money. According to the UK workers who skipped university, working early creates a helpful experience for them to work in multiple fields.
In conclusion, although working without a university education fastens the process of moneymaking and develops new skills for workers, I assume it is better to have a proper university education since it helps obtain crucial knowledge and betters the chances of job acceptance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 56, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'workers'' or 'worker's'?
Suggestion: workers'; worker's
..., attending university contributes to a workers expertise and increases the rate of job...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, then, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50902527076 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18117532498 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552346570397 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2193863228 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.384615385 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4615384615 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190557595563 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757364551902 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739991838827 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137288516264 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759554570913 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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