Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after the school. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
According to certain individuals’ tertiary education is the optimum channel to a prosperous career. However, others subscribe to the idea that securing a job immediately after secondary school is better off. In the following essay we will discuss both sides of the topic and even validate both the opinions with plausible examples.
On the one hand, working right after secondary school seems to be a preferred option for a major reason. As nowadays a soaring rise in educated unemployed witnessed globally. For example, after aspiring for Diploma courses or PHD’s in various reputed educational institutes and after successfully completing their courses, many are found to be still struggling to find a decent job in a multinational company, as well as many of them have invested an astronomical amount of money in recruiting the best education services oversees, which seems to be a total waste. For these individual with heavy debts which may take a couple years to repay. So we can conclude, they have learnt the hard way after burning their pockets.
On the other hand, higher institute education is the ultimate means to a fulfill a need for professional growth and even a much desired promotion. As merely, a school pass out would be entitled to reap immediate benefits, but in the long run this decision may prove to be way too detrimental as it doesn’t equip you with minimum qualifications to even meet his goals for a lavish lifestyle. For instance, an MBBS student also has to struggle for a couple of years to specialize in any field of his choice like, Gynecology, dermatology, ophthalmology etc. And the demand for these professions is always on a rise. So, but obviously, in commensuration with your degree, you could be even regarded for a promotion along with a lucrative pay package
In conclusion, I firmly believe in the proposition that a college education endows you to take pragmatic decisions and the chances of growth are also pretty sanguine. Thus, it comes with a guarantee of a safe and secure for life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, second, so, still, thus, well, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1718.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03812316716 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00097592506 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607038123167 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 97.1807699127 49.4020404114 197% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.714285714 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3571428571 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.85714285714 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119319498803 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0396650538799 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462182128953 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0847728036276 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584190335961 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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