Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
After finishing high school, teenagers have faced the dilemma of whether to get a job or continue studying. People have different views about whether or not seeking an occupation is the best way to be successful. Although it can be argued that getting a job early has some benefits, I am of the opinion that following higher education is better.
On one side of the argument, there are people who believed that applying for a job instantly after graduation is the best route. The main reason for believing this is that individuals are able to earn money early. Besides providing practical experiences, several jobs which are not required for the degree such as programmers or designers, for example, giving a considerable amount of income. As a result, having a job straight after school has become an upward trend nowadays.
However, I do not think these kinds of arguments stand up to scrutiny as I am of the opinion that teenager should continue their studies at university or college. Firstly, a number of professional jobs nowadays, which are high-paid such as accounting and auditors, for example, requiring high academic qualification. In addition, in the intensely competitive job market, people may become unemployment unless having enough knowledge. For instance, having specific skills and knowledge is extremely necessary for several management jobs such as hotel or restaurant manager. As a consequence, the university provides a tremendous job opportunity.
To sum up, although there are strong arguments for and against following higher education, I would argue that there is sufficient evidence to demonstrate that this is not the case, and, therefore, people should consider before deciding to get a job instead of continuing studying.
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- Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
- Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 143, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...ying. People have different views about whether or not seeking an occupation is the best way t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27857142857 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97519507164 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589285714286 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1632621407 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.692307692 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92307692308 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234877618854 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855037962299 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462226153272 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135849268047 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056256571824 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.