Nowadays,technology has been dominating the world, it is argued by some that many significant benefits have been brought about in people’s lives by technology. Other people think, however, we are heavily relying on technology for an arrayof purposes. Personally, I think the positive effects outweigh the negatives.
It is undeniable the fact that technology brings about many disadvantages to people interms of social media. The misleading information declared by groups of broadcasting and big tech's which can cause conflict between the social class. For example, in the US presidential election, Republican voters believe there is a conspiracy theory about electoral fraud happening and they will fight for justice. In this occasion only, the social media in general and bigtech's individuals have manipulated public information and oriented the readers.
However, that is not to say social media is of no benefit to people’s lives. The internet was invented and globalisation has happened, creating the global village where people not only connect and exchange necessary information in some sectors but also improve people’s social circle and reinforce their personal relationship. Apart from, with today’s technology, by using the state-of-the-art equipment, doctors can diagnose many illnesses faster. For example, X-ray machines can find out the problem of diseases in the human bone and doctors can conduct a treatment regimen to patients. Therefore, combining technology and medicine improves humanlife expectancy.
In conclusion, although people’s lives can be sabotaged by technology, these techniques also boot human life up and make it better. People should not too depend on technology and find out the way to balance it benefits as well as drawbacks
- The presence of technology in the classroom has become more and more apparent and offers students tremendous resources with which to supplement their education Given time technology will completely replace the traditional teacher in the classroom Do you 73
- Some people believe that technology has led to many positive developments in their lives while others think technology is gradually taking over control of the way people live Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, well, apart from, for example, i think, in general, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.088 5.12529762239 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.58530333445 2.80592935109 128% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.7144991516 49.4020404114 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 169.111111111 106.682146367 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7777777778 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2222222222 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221310746947 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925607537997 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688620600304 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141776085422 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623561101212 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.1 13.0946893788 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 18.69 50.2224549098 37% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.4 11.3001002004 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.34 12.4159519038 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.98 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 22.0 9.78957915832 225% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 10.7795591182 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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