Some people believe that technology has made man more social. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In our contemporary society, it’s believed that advancement in technology has impacted some merits on human’s behavior like making them more social. Personally, I partially disagree with this view. In this essay I will put forth some reasons to support my notion before arriving at conclusion.
First and foremost, although progress in technology has simplified our daily communication transaction and connection, this phenomenon have been imposed sweeping negative changes in human’s life. With inventing a growing increase in number of digital communicating advances, not only have people not required face to face communication in compare of before, but also human have not tended to meet their family whom can meet their via social media such as video call in what’s app or telegram.
Secondly, despite the fact that improvement in technology has broadened our minds and facilitated our work responsibilities, it has cause reduce the number of Human Resources. The result of this matter is restriction the need of human contact. In retrospect people tended to have more connection at their work to meet their work needs.
Moreover, nowadays, due to mechanized life human should work a great deal of time for providing enough cash and budget to buying modernized life facilities such as tv, computers, kitchen equipments. Thereby human have less leisure time to lift up their sprits.
In conclusion, given the above consideration, the mechanical part of life has improved by technology, in contrast life in terms of mentally has underwent adversely effects and mental diseases such as depression and seclusion. This situation Can be addressed by noticing to more face to face communication rather than depending on technology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43542435424 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03056959414 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634686346863 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.6413983813 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.75 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118776033177 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0441675905409 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537327370068 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0658502901277 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618489629086 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.