Some people believe that the teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free times.this can benefit the teenager and the community as well do you agree or disagree with this point of view?
Working for the society is always good and rewarding for all. Thus, the idea of inspiring teenager for a voluntary work and result in a Win-Win situation for both the society and the teenagers.
there are ample benefits of teenagers volunteering for the community in the relational time. First of all, teenager learn to interact with variety of a people. By doing so, they can developed of what is like a teamwork, compassion, interactive ability and so on.in addition, they develop a tolerance and become a considerate to all the class and the races of a people in their community. II II teams can attend a science of achievement and self worth by a working for a society.this help them to boost your confidence level.finally, teenager develop a deeper understanding of a culture, lifestyle and the tradition of their own people.
On the other hand, there are certain drawbacks of the same as well. To begin with, such work is time consuming and within highly busy academic days, it is hard for the school going twins to spare anytime for a volunteering. Moreover, teenager are naive and vulnerable. Hence they can easily be drawn to in legal, improper and harmful activities. Such instant increase the chance of their exploitation and their may fall victim of some criminal tendency. However, I think all such a floors are a manageable with a proper guidance and the making of a legal framework.
in conclusion, I firmly believe that the notion of a children doing unpaid community work is indeed good. I would also like to adopt that proper monitoring in the care out to be exercise to avoid any untoward consequences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, i think, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84532374101 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88406893655 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586330935252 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7650501636 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2142857143 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1428571429 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255709473178 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816668325388 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575297738333 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136949746898 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538727277644 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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