Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well.
To what extent do you agree or disagree.
The important if youngsters contribute in to social works without any pay which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is Beneficial while others reject this notion. The substantial influences of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years.In my opinion the former proposition appears to be more rational. This will further elaborate my views for favouring the positive and negative impact of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
Analyzing the statement and explaining further, the first and foremost reason behind this is that teenagers can contribute in society for numerous unpaid community work. They can spread the knowledge about a lot of legal issues of individual to society. For example, they can make awareness about education to those person, who think that it is not too virtual. Thus, it will help them to enhance their personality and confidence. Another striking benefits in this regard is that only youth has opportunities to contributes in economic growth by their possible efforts. Categorically discussing it cannot be ignored that the main reason behind this is that nowadays there are several issues that needs to highlight but none of anyone speak on them. So only youth can do this because they are the future of a economy.
Probing ahead, one of main reason stem from the fact is that teenagers are surviving under that age where they have to complete their own visions and goals which required lots of time. Thus if they do work for social purpose then they may distract from their actual prospects. Moving further it is pertinent to mention that in the mid age of life everyone want success but if individuals do unpaid social works then it may effect to their self satisfaction. For instance, if a student do an unpaid work for social motives than it may affect his/her personal life and they have to pressurize themselves for this. Hence they may firstly think about their own prospects apart from any unpaid community work and all. Apart from the reasons mentioned above it can be clearly stated why many are against of this trend.
To recapitulate, according to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of unpaid social works by teenagers are too great to be ignored.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, so, then, thus, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 50.0 24.0651302605 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1962.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 389.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04370179949 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67471053266 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54498714653 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.485506814 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.625 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3125 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25759141349 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08362272687 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537539774386 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15672198459 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488283646208 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.