Some people believe that television is a powerful educational tool. Other people believe that television is nothing more than mindless entertainment and should be discouraged.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?
Discuss both view and give your opinion.
With the steady growth in modernization, the life style of people have been greatly affected because of various invention like television, Which has transformed the life of human tremendously. Nevertheless, there are some issues with remain irrevocable and as complex as ever. For instance, the given topic asserts that Do television; a powerful educational tool or mindless entertainment?. I 70% agree and 30% disagree with statement because of n number of benefits of television to enhance the knowledge of human. Through this essay, I shall explore the dimension of topic and gave my opinion by the end.
Beyond doubt, whenever people talk about the powerful tool of education, television is in the top of priority list of each individual because by the help of news channels avalible on TV children get lot of knowledge of one part of globe to another, and audio visual methord is one of the best method to educate children. Secondly, various fictions educational channels avalible on television like discovery, natural geography. Children not only grasp a lot of knowledge related to outer space but also the invention done by the scientists. For instance, the recent survey conducted by Central Board Of Secondary Education among the CBSE affiliated schools situated in New Delhi asserts that children who learn by the use of television perform have better scientific knowledge in comparison to children who learnt by books.
However, I would not overlook other side too. To begin with, some time children spend a lot of time on television and start procastinating their work as well as become lazier, Which eventually effects their academic performance in the school.
In conclusion, there is no doubt that television is powerful educational tool but as we all know that " all glitter is not gold" as due to excess spending of time on TV. I tend to believe that children should be allowed to watch television for period of time.
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| 2019-11-20 | my5901 | 30 | view |
| 2018-06-28 | Nikhil Sharma | 92 | view |
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...ould be allowed to watch television for period of time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12852664577 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90948273223 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58934169279 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.3143415645 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.846153846 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5384615385 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4615384615 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244712448123 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813739142961 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057490991869 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137183604573 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479605148374 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.