Over the past years, science and technology has brought significant development in our world and one of the main break-through among them is Aviation . Air travel has made human life more advanced by time-saving, faster arrival at destination and expanded tourism and business world-wide. Even though it holds vital part some believe that, there can be a massive reduction in their service in the upcoming years. I think this would bring negative impact in travel and development as people has to rely on alternative transport choices which are time consuming which eventually can reflect marked reduction in tourism and marketing.
Human life has become much more easier with air travelling. People living abroad make it more useful as they could visit family in a nick of time and many make use of flight travelling with better deals for holiday destinations. At the same time, aviation technology explore the field of tourism and widen the aspects of marketing and business. For Instance, developing country like India has had drastic changes with the expansion of tourism. Moreover, flight journeys has made distance shorter and tourism sector has raised the global economy significantly.
With everything, excess usage will have negative impact as such increased demand of flight services has caused pollution and reason for increased global warming. However, reducing the air travel is not a feasible notion to resolve the adverse effects. It equally affects development of a country and makes human life harder with alternative transport ways which are time-consuming. Therefore, It is ideal for governments to look for options like better technological advancements to overcome the current issues instead of stopping the profitable and convenient transport system.
In conclusion , limiting the number of flights is not an ideal option as it can drop down the economy, business and makes human life harder. As Time is money faster ways of transport should always stay as it eventually reflects in global development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, as to, for instance, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1725.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40752351097 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82583195349 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598746081505 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7240481321 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15510867354 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482181758706 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566259099445 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0878079816577 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0842383520815 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.