These days, some people thought that there should be a specific punishment for various types of crime. But what is the most effective method for dealing with the increasing crime rate in the community?. some people believe that the fixed sentence should be implemented for a different kind of offense. I completely disagree with the statement and in this essay, I will support my opinion with suitable examples.
Firstly, consultation is the best idea to deal with prisoners. For instance, with proper discussion on circumstances in which the bad guy did a criminal activity moreover tells the solution how to control the situation perfectly. For example, In Sweden, the crime rate is almost zero because many decades ago they launched a rehabilitation program. consequently, the crime rate there reached about zero.
Another reason why I disagree with the statement is that jail is not a good place for a person who wanted to become a good citizen of the community. Take my friend who is now a murderer as an example. I strongly believed that if the government provided a tremendous type of rehabilitation after when he did a robbery in the shop then he did not become a serious killer.
On the other hand, Mostly, the resident of the society believed that through action against criminals we can reduce the crime rate in the world.
In conclusion, although it is a common belief that punishment is the only cure for crime. I personally, I think through debate with criminals furthermore give some suggestion about the solution how to control the situation would be a good option in addition punishment should be last option.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00364963504 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83705313273 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576642335766 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.891099 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9285714286 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5714285714 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33346563906 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113749322603 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113425109055 0.0667982634062 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170716292088 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108238929927 0.056905535591 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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