A generation ago, people were smart as well slim but nowadays people are becoming fat. However, obesity becomes a major problem all around the world. This essay will look at the core reasons for this and propose some solid solutions.
one of the main causes of the problem is that fast food. By this I mean this type of food has a lot of unhealthy ingredients such as excessive starch, proteins, and sugar which causes overweight in the human body. For example, two years ago, when I was keen on fast food and eat it in moring moreover in the evening, I was getting weight. The solution is for the public should finish the habit of eating this kind of food.
Another problem is the lack of routine morning exercise. That is to say when people do not take exercise in early in the morning the fatty ingredient of food remains, which cause weight gaining health problem. To tackle this issue, people should do workout early in the morning to digest this type of harmful element from the body.
Last but not least issue is that modern technology. To be more precise, the latest technology makes human work easy, consequently, people are becoming lazy. As a result, dependence on modern products should reduce as well should some work physically.
To sum up, More and more people are facing the issue of overweight, due to lack of routine exercise, fast food, and usage of modern technology. This is a serious problem, and unless society eradicates fast food from daily life, takes physical work, and lastly reduces the addiction to modern gadgets. My view is that the main responsibility for solving this problem lies with the public and government.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, lastly, look, moreover, so, well, for example, i mean, kind of, such as, as a result, to sum up, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76655052265 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42033657017 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557491289199 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6663685248 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9375 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9375 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233819492688 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806322884868 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701980546604 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127847787841 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067240033836 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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