All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both children and adults. What are the reasons for the rise obesity, how could it be tracked.
In today's globalised, Urbanized and the over-populated world, more and more individuals are eating meal in order to maintain their healthy lifestyle. It has been suggested that eating more food is a cause of obesity. This problem is rising especially in Asian countries. This essay will discuss the reasons, and offer some measure to takle this issue.
Form an overall perspective, perhaps the most compelling reason why obesity is increasing is because people eat more junk food, such as burgers and pizza's. This mean that, If any body who eat this type of food, they might not stable their health. For illustrate, A recent research concluded that 40% of obesity cases were reported in Bangladesh, they only eat outside food. A further point of this idea could be that people do not walk after eating food, they go to the bed for rest. The result of this phenomenon might be that obesity attack on their body and also many illnesses grow in short period of time. Unlike in the past, people used to eat food at home, but these days in the era of modernization young people want to eat outside food.
Despite these arguments, there are variable possible solutions. Firstly, Masses should not eat restaurant food because they do not use healthy oil in the meal. Secondly, If people go to morning walk on daily basis. This problem could be solved. The decision as to whether every person should focus on their health in order to save their life must be seen in the context of the entire society.
To conclude, this is a topic which is very relevant to the contemporary society. However, I believe the best solution is that people should only eat healthy food at home. If government implement high taxes on junk food, it will be more desirable for future generations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, as to, in short, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82026143791 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48697104736 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56862745098 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7800206336 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.9444444444 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162200535744 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632196427766 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758064343614 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0963294696638 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030866864807 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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