It is a topic that worth discussion. some says fixed punishments for each type of crime is better while, others say punishments for each type of crime should vary according to the situation and motivation of the crime. I have the same view of the latter.
The people who support fixed punishments have solid reasons to prove their argument.First and foremost, the fear of definite and prefixed punishments deter the people from doing crime.Many people in a democratic country have a concept that, they can easily win the case if, they are able to afford a talented advocate. This smart advocate has a major role in reducing the punishments with fabricated proofs . Supporters of fixed punishment strongly argue that this would not happen if, there is a fixed punishment for each type of crime. Another important point is, this type of punishment helps to reduce the time of court procedures enormously. Since there is a fixed punishment for each type of crime, there is no need of long hearing sections. For example in Kingdom of Saudi Arabia has a fixed punishment system therefore, there is no pending cases in the courts there.
However, the people who support the opposite argument says many points to clarify their stand. Firstly,each crime different from the other in terms its motivation,circumstances so the court should consider these factors before coming to a final decree. They also argues murder did for self defence and murder did for theft is not same. The accidental murder while, trying to save oneself is not considered as a serious crime. I too have the same view of this people as it is very genuine and clear.
To conclude,I strongly again emphasis that, punishment should be based on the nature ,motive and circumstances of the crime.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96283783784 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83992712796 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543918918919 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.051696925 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9333333333 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53333333333 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.386325154582 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120640606866 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112712366884 0.0667982634062 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25553608078 0.151304729494 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574657402945 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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