In the contemporary days, Internet has become more and more important to our lives due to its convenience and strong access to the worldwide. There are arguments between people that whether it should be charged by governments or not. This essay will present my point of view and offer the best suggestion for this issue.
In terms of the frequency of Internet usage. There are various applications which are only available when we connect to wifi. The Internet contains infinite information source that we need for our work, studing and even daily. As long as we have a strong connection to the online websites, our lives will become much easier than ever. Besides, same thing happens to entertaining demand as we can definitely download favourable games to play, espécially the ones require online access, the Internet will increasingly prove its power to human life.
By the popularity of the Internet in many aspects of life, as a result, governments should actually have an exempt from Internet fees. Although this could be a difficult decision due to the high technology having on making the Internet, particularly a non-stop development of 4G and 5G nowadays that might bring to the loss of profit, I personally think this sacrifice is worthwhile when we consider many impossibilities have been done throughout easy access to the Internet. Therefore, governments in the world should give access for free in order to create more chance for people who could do extraodinary things thank to the Internet, like some nations such as Korea or Japan had applied.
In conclusion, I truly believe it is better to not charge the Internet fees as any other services so that citizens in this globe can be fully connected and intergrated in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 169, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, if, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99315068493 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79663497767 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616438356164 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.0592278693 49.4020404114 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.5 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339862958013 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10890380991 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751229022859 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191449279378 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0728198712063 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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