Some people believe that travelling within a city is better by car while some other think bicycle is a better means. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Nowadays, more and more vehicle joining the traffic simultaneously. many people prefer traveling by car around the city because they think that it is greater, while other groups of people trust that bicycle is a better choice. both means have its own benefits and each person will choose what is best for his/her in particular scenario. However, I believe the benefits of riding bicycle would outweigh car’s advantages.
There are several reasons why some people believe car is a better option to travel within the city. cars are considered as one of the most convenience transportation method. Firstly, it’s is faster to drive, especially when people are in rush. Moreover, it is safer to drive a car, compared to motorbike or bicycle, especially during bad weather. For example, in Vietnam, the main reason for most people when buying car is that it will be safer for kids during raining season. Thus, it is not difficult to understand why some people choose a car to travel within the city and think it is better than other transport.
On the other hand, riding a bicycle brings a lot more benefits, not only for individuals but also for the society and environment. The first and most important benefit of using a bicycle on a daily basis is the improving of health and fitness. one might not need any other exercise if she/he riding bicycle to work every day, for instance. Secondly, bicycle is considered as the most economical transportation mean as it does not require much extra cost for its operation like: petrol, insurance, parking,…Last but not least, bicycle is one of the vehicles or I must say the only vehicle that does not consume any energy to operate as well as dispose any CO2 to the environment . Therefore, riding a bicycle also contributes to improve the air pollution in the city and reduce the usage of fossil resources. According to above benefit, many group of people including me, trust that riding bicycle is the better choice for travelling within the city.
In conclusion, this essay discussed that both cars and bicycle had its own advantages. Some people choose the convenience of cars while other are on the side of health and environment by saying bicycle is a better choice for travelling around the city. I myself, support the usage of bicycle because of its tremendous benefits and I do believe that in the near future, more and more people will use bicycle as their main transportation method in the city.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in particular, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2048.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 418.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8995215311 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69565730672 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.471291866029 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 664.2 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.5845029233 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.789473684 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.89473684211 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359579977758 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123799377592 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129001906465 0.0667982634062 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245673421727 0.151304729494 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0736045506076 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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