Some people believe that unpaid community service should be compulsory part of high school
programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching
sports to younger children).
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Every nation needs citizens who display social commitment and actively work to improve the community for the welfare
of its residents. Since students are the nation’s future, some people have argued that volunteer work should be a
mandatory part of the school curriculum. I strongly agree with this view, because volunteering not only improves the
community as a whole but also builds valuable character traits.
First and foremost, community service develops strong-charactered individuals by exposing them to new perspectives
and encouraging a healthy work ethic. I recall that when I volunteered to clean up the trash in my high school, I gained
an immense appreciation for the arduous work that janitors went through each day to keep our school tidy. Witnessing
such labor with which society members improve our society can impart valuable lessons about hard work, commitment,
and meeting goals and deadlines.
Moreover, volunteering actively improves one's community as a whole. It serves as a bridge that connects community
members with each other and can inspire solutions to community problems. In my experience, the volunteering
program at my high school allowed me to form lifelong friendships with fellow volunteers, which has strengthened my
relationship with my neighborhood. It is also worth noting that such exposure can put students in touch with the
obstacles their community faces, which can inspire them to choose a significant line of work that directly benefits their
community.
To sum up, teenagers should be made to partake in volunteer work as part of their high school curriculum, since it will
build strong character traits while simultaneously progressing the community. As a firm believer in this approach, I
suggest that every high school across the nation should take this proposal into serious consideration and implement it
into their school agenda.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, then, while, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1623.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52040816327 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99343884307 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595238095238 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2600836304 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.25 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.38176352705 411% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226517196276 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086179945279 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434518858098 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.068111589532 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434295783198 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.