The positive and negative impact of social media platforms on individuals and on society.
In recent times, the use of social media platforms has increased rapidly due to technological advancements. As a result of that, these applications are an essential part of everyone's life. There is no doubt that such applications have both positive and negative impacts, not only on individuals but also on society. This essay will explore two main positive and negative impacts, both on a person and on the community.
To begin with, social media platforms can provide an employment opportunity. In other words, companies can share vacancies and internship-related posts on various social media platforms, such as Internsala, Nokari.com and many other platforms, which can be beneficial to job seekers. A report that was published by Time of India by surveying 300+ companies depicts that more than 65% of graduates get their first job through LinkedIn. Apart from this, social media platforms contribute to globalization. To clarify, one can make online friends from other countries and learn about their culture, traditions, and festivals. For instance, Indian traditional attire has been replaced by western clothing, such as jeans and t-shirts.
Moving on to the negative impacts, firstly, individuals may lose their concentration in work and suffer from mental stress. On top of this, if a person spends more than 2 hours on social media platforms, such as Instagram, Facebook and Twitter, he will become an anti-social person. According to a report submitted by AIIMS Delhi, if a healthy human being overspends his time on social media platforms regularly, he may lose his eye sight. Last but not least, social media posts that reveal negative and unwanted information can influence the community in the wrong direction. To be more precise, the government of India has banned many uses of Twitter that try to create religious controversies.
In conclusion, it is undeniable fact that social media platforms have a significant positive impact on individuals and society because they provide job opportunities to many people and make a contribution to create a modern society. However, people may get addicted to these platforms which leads to frustration, and the community may be misguided by the false information available on these platforms.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 429, Rule ID: EYE_BROW[1]
Message: This word is usually spelt together: 'eyesight'.
Suggestion: eyesight
...ia platforms regularly, he may lose his eye sight. Last but not least, social media posts...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as a result, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1901.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35492957746 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10630282468 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549295774648 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6547847985 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.8125 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1875 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4375 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.386155206034 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112649871465 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0951413533801 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228248683776 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520277393631 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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