Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example working for a charity, improving they neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children)
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
School is a place where children and students are able to acquire precious knowledge, leading them onto bright future. There have been a thought that free social service should be added in high school curriculum necessarily. In this essay, I will completely agree with the statement because there would be a worthy consequence.
In my view, one of the main reason that leading us to sum up such program is that, by helping those who have not enough power to do something or just needed a help person, students would be able to realize one of the most significant thing, humanity or good personality. In my experience, when I was a student in 8th grade, class teacher suggest us to help service workers, who play crucial work for cleaning road ice and garbage. So, I dished up got soup, and began to punch ice, by using grub-axe. As result, I realized value of life, I feel happiness from these people, really happy for just cup of soup.
Moreover, doing these some of the unpaid community service influence both interactive people 2 people to some extent. In addition, that pupil is appreciated by people for doing charity work implies he or she would have better employment opportunity later because of their pleasurable CV. For example, I used to play basketball barely. One time, the brother, living in front of my door, helped me to fix my broken shots. Thereby, he induced me to play basketball until now.
In conclusion, it is logical thing for unpaid community work to being part of high school programs. Personally, I believe that not only bright future, but also personality and humanity would desire into well-being.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 271, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nt thing, humanity or good personality. In my experience, when I was a student in ...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ust cup of soup. Moreover, doing these some of the unpaid community service influence both...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, really, so, well, for example, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82857142857 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63411682136 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646428571429 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3664812703 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5714285714 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07142857143 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258072882297 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838693703974 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.088360456602 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154700282989 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503848256913 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.