Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on society. Others, however, deny that these factors have any significant influence on people’s behaviour.
What is your opinion on that issue?
It has become impossible to imagine our life without computers and televisions. However, majority of people consider them harmful for society as they have aggressive games and programs. Unlike this, others think they may not affect the behaviour of individuals a lot. Considering both of the views, l believe, people are more responsible in this situation.
Admittedly, extreme scenes of films or programs on TV may have negative impact on some certain groups. For example, teenagers are easy to be addicted to watch TV or play violence games and they may start to imitate the hero of the film or game. As a result, they try to do delinquencies unconsciously and these minor crimes can become bigger. Finally, a lot of bullying and little crimes may happen because of violent and anti-social games and programs
On the other hand, blaming the technology is not always true, as there are other causes of it. Firstly, people, who had good upbringing and are surrounded by the well-mannered, are not likely to change their behaviour, in other words they use technology appropriately. The bad atmosphere in the family may have more negative influence on people’s behaviour. For example, if a father is bad-behaviour and has negative qualities, he can be role model for a child and this may lead him to become bully or even a criminal. Furthermore, the lack of cultural awareness can increase individuals’ bad behaviours. For instance, in our culture it is disapproved to slap or to shout at the older. In order to reduce damaging effects of these characters, people should teach their children how to behave at an early age.
To conclude, it is vital to mention that technology can partially be responsible for people’s negative manners but lifestyle and upbringing could play primary role in damaging effects on society. In my view, it would be better to teach youngster how to have good qualities.
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- Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on society Others however deny that these factors have any significant influence on people s behaviour What is your opinion on that issue 78
- Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on society Others however deny that these factors have any significant influence on people s behaviour What is your opinion on that issue 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, so, well, for example, for instance, as a result, in my view, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01577287066 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95014922834 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577287066246 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5218693733 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.375 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8125 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207008690538 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662306406599 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515726439518 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122306403235 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345058229648 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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