Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both iews and give your own opinion.

Every country has its own culture and traditions. It is often argued that tourist should follow local customs and behaviour or the host country should welcome cultural differences. I think that all countries must welcome international tourist despite of cultural differences.
Few people believe hat visitors should follow local customs and behaviour. Despite being from another nation, if they try residential customs and way of living they will be welcomed to all places. Even old and uneducated people who does not know international language can easily understand and get along with them. For instance, if we go to Japan after knowing their traditions and language it will eventually be very good experience for us. We can instantly travel form one place to other and visit without having any issues. Moreover, we feel welcomed.
But host countries must welcome cultural differences because it is not always necessary to learn customs and behaviour if people are visiting a place for short period of time. Main purpose of visiting new places is to explore places and understand about way of living. Therefore, it is not always needed to be familiar with traditions. For example, international tourist from Japan, Korea, USA visit Nepal every year. If it was a case that everyone need to learn Nepali language and wear Nepali dressed nobody would come to visit our country.
I personally think that, it is good if we know about residential cultures and manners but it should not be given main priority. Host country should welcome cultural differences and also can adapt favourable cultures.
In conclusion, difference in culture should be welcomed in every nook and corner of the world because it is really difficult and tiredsome to learn new cultures just for the purpose of seeing that place. It is worth knowing but not necessary.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 161, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...f people are visiting a place for short period of time. Main purpose of visiting new places is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, really, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12292358804 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67770788831 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53488372093 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.6723561462 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6666666667 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7222222222 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38888888889 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31345710281 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107172548699 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132278075864 0.0667982634062 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195036961251 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131237689354 0.056905535591 231% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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