Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Other disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, traveling to other countries with different cultures have been increased. It is often happened for tourists to be obliged to follow their host people’s customs. However, some people think that is not true and host people should accept difference in customs. I do believe that it is necessary for a tourist to get familiar with his or her host country culture and try to follow them as people of that country.
Firstly, the purpose of tourism industry in all of the world is to close people with different cultures more and more together and try to remove what that makes them to feel discrimination. If a visitor does not follow his or her host people customs, it can be had negative effects on people’s behavior and they may feel more difference between themselves and other country. For example, some customs reference to religion and if a tourist with a different religion does not respect them, host people think that the tourist dose not respect their religion and resulting more serious problems.
Secondly, making a tourist familiar with cultures and customs of a country is so far easier than making large groups of people familiar with different cultures of visitors. However, it is needed for governments, especially those who want to attract more and more tourist, to teach their people how to response when they see actions by visitors which are different with their customs and encourage them to avoid from violent responses.
In overall, I believe that it would be better and more efficient if tourists try to follow local customs and believes. However, people in countries, with high potential to attract tourist, should learn how to response difference in cultures.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07446808511 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66765910686 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482269503546 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.6881466904 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.090909091 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6363636364 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225696604453 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110185054835 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521524623527 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158809936962 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710217212208 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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