Anybody can use a mobile phone to answer the work and personal calls at any time or 7 days aweek.Does this development have more positive or negative effects on both individuals and society?

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Anybody can use a mobile phone to answer the work and personal calls at any time or 7 days a
week.
Does this development have more positive or negative effects on both individuals and society?

Submitted by Iraj on Sun, 04/28/2019 - 08:12

Technology has come such a long way nowadays that people can make use of their mobile phone to
answer work or personal calls at any time. Although there are some negative consequences of this
development on individuals and society, I believe that they are outweighed by the positive effects.
On the individual aspect, the fact that no work calls are missed could greatly enhance one’s work
efficiency. As we are living in the era of globalisation, the international cooperation between companies
is common and necessary. Being able to make calls and discuss with business partners regardless of time
zones is a great advantage. On a larger scale, this can also contribute to the development of the
economy, thus an increase in the living standard. Furthermore, people can benefit from the fact that
their beloved ones are available for a call at any time. One could seek help from their friends and family
whenever they need, which is especially beneficial in case of emergency. And as the flow of information
between people is constant, society will be connected and move forward.
However, the drawbacks of this development should not be overlooked. Being able to answer calls all
the time means people have less privacy, even in their own home. It also means that workers have to
handle a larger amount of workload and have less quality time for their family. However, the work-life
balance could still be maintained by just a simple act of switching off one’s mobile phone whenever they
leave the office or do not want to be bothered.
In conclusion, despite a few drawbacks, the use of mobile phones for work and personal calls brings
about more benefits to individuals and society.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, so, still, thus, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09154929577 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76788336778 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570422535211 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.7684706401 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.285714286 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.38176352705 411% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354743942304 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111076022733 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0871712590471 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0984078072833 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0824756413055 0.056905535591 145% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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