Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behavior. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Recently, the phenomenon of cultural differences and its corresponding impacts have sparked a long-running dispute. In this regard, whereas remarkable number of individuals claim that following local customs and beliefs is inevitable, others are of the opinion that welcoming various cultures is far better. In my mind, adopting cultural differences can be beneficial for societies and people as well.
Obviously, miscellaneous nations, around the four corners of the globe, have developed unique cultures, throughout their history. Such features as beliefs, customs, costumes, and even ritual dances stem from their cultures. Societies should adopt the visitors’ customs ad behaviors by which positively affect their own culture. Hence, this acceptance paves the way to enhance weaker points of destination cultures.
In addition, one of the major aspects of cultures is language. Diversity of cultures leads to language diversity across the society. Consequently, being familiar with distinctive cultures as well as languages might flourish individuals’ creativity. As scientists’ findings, societies can have far more innovative population thanks to training bilingual and multicultural youngsters.
On the other hands, we shouldn’t lose sight of opponents. They elucidate that cultures which are visitors’ destination, must be obeyed by tourists, not just in terms of customs, but also with respect to behaviors. For example, visitors of India should respect such animals as cows, regardless of their own culture. If they don’t show a great deal of respect in this case, it is likely that serious conflicts will be aroused, for instance cultures conflicts, or even in the worst situation nations battles. Moreover, the effects of cultural invasions (i.e., a wealthy country penetrates into a poorer nation’s culture for exploiting purposes) should be taken into consideration.
To sum up, despite compelling arguments on both sides, I am inclined to believe that welcoming to cultural dissimilarities comes first. By the way, could you imagine a world without loads of cultures which don’t exert influences on each other?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, if, moreover, so, well, whereas, for example, for instance, in addition, as well as, by the way, to sum up, with respect to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1754.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51572327044 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88970270263 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610062893082 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 318.0 20.2975951904 1567% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1754.0 106.682146367 1644% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 318.0 20.7667163134 1531% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 181.0 7.06120827912 2563% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252256788854 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.252256788854 0.084324248473 299% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132382655134 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550024813347 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 163.6 13.0946893788 1249% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -259.75 50.2224549098 -517% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 128.5 11.3001002004 1137% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.22 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 24.42 8.58950901804 284% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 62.0 9.78957915832 633% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 129.2 10.1190380762 1277% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 129.0 10.7795591182 1197% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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