Some people believe that we cannot learn anything from the past for our life today, while others believe that history is a valuable source of information to understand human's life.
History has always been the most mysterious and the most fascinating subject at the same time. Questioning, how useful history can prove, is something everyone has faced. More to this, I partly agree that history can be useful, as it comes with it's own set of advantages and disadvantages.
Firstly, recognizing things that cannot be implement in today's society, due to the change in lifestyle. For instance, people in younger generation needs global citizenship. In history, most of kingdoms fought for piece of the land, however, countries today do not have to do this. Due to world peace, as the society is growing humans value humans more irrespective of their country, race or religion. Thus, needing to global citizenship.
Secondly, woman has a role in financial management unlike in previous days. In olden times, woman contributed in household strictly, which is clearly not something to learn from history, but to break apart.
Contradicting to this, human has always learnt from his mistakes. We can state that history has helped us to understand that prevention of World-War is necessary. Maintaining world peace is essential, thus formation of UNESCO and prestigious awards such as "NOBLE peace award" has been conducted.
Lastly, the important thing to learn from history is the bountiful architecture, the 7 wonders, for example, "The Taj Mahal", "The Statue of Liberty" is something to learn from. Many ancient Greek and Roman architecture buildings are still intact. The structural geometry behind pyramids and the Spynx is interesting as well as essential in architectural field.
Thus, to recapitulate, history unlink any other subject, comes with it's set of advantages and disadvantages. There are beautiful architectures to learn from, although, there are strict laws to impede apart from. As same as, kingdom's fighting for a piece of land, people dying in order to fight for this land is something faulty and amateurish. Nevertheless, we have got world peace organizations from these acts.
- Some people think that the most important thing about being rich is it gives a person the opportunity to help other people. 61
- The pie charts below give data on the spending and consumption of resources by countries of the world and how the population is distributed. 67
- Some people believe that we cannot learn anything from the past for our life today, while others believe that history is a valuable source of information to understand human's life. 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 186, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the kingdoms') or simply say ''most kingdoms''.
Suggestion: most of the kingdoms; most kingdoms
...n needs global citizenship. In history, most of kingdoms fought for piece of the land, however, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, thus, well, apart from, for example, for instance, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1741.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.440625 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05482296695 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603125 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.435846149 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.05 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173929211051 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.046194675807 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0329469143567 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0810415282231 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339538996636 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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