Some people believe that we should start giving formal education to students at a much earlier age, while others think we should wait until the age of 7. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Discuss and give reasons for your answer.
Education is a powerful weapon which we can use to run the world on a progressive track. One of the most controversial issue today relates to that, at what age children should acquire formal education? I completely agree with the given statement, and give reasons for my answer through some examples and assertions in the further piece of essay.
The first step to understand that, how can children adapt formal education at early age? Broadly speaking, the prominent reason is new generation children. It has been seen that nowadays children have sharp brains and adapt things rapidly. Similarly, there are many kids which learn different things at early age with the help of internet. Children of new generation are extremely smart, compared to children earlier, they are acquiring knowledge instantly with the help of new advancement. A good illustration is, Finland education system is currently the number one education system and they has also implemented education standard at early age of 4. As a result, it is clear that adapting knowledge at early age is easy for kids.
The second foremost reason is safety. If children will start studying at early age than it will be easy for parents to keep there child away from extra activities such as using computer for long time or playing games on them which can be harmful to them at early age. Meanwhile, these activities can also cause certain disease as well. In addition, sending children to school will not vanish the total time for their playing because they provide effective playing time for children. Moreover, in school children can both study and play at perfect time which will be highly beneficial for them.
In conclusion, It depends on the child that he or she is able to learn distinct things at early age or not and the authorities can make stringent laws for formal education of children in every country so there will be no more arguments that children should go to school either at early age or at the age of 7.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 595, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...he number one education system and they has also implemented education standard at ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, second, similarly, so, well, while, broadly speaking, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1655.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86764705882 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57101726128 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535294117647 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.9388625452 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.4375 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0625 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235448439379 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0831569425492 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615679709043 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174400094625 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784891217168 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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