some people believe that yoga should be introduced asa subject in schools while others think that it will increase the burden on students.To what extent do you agree or disagree . Give your opinion.
The nature of yoga is to shine the light of awareness into the darkest corners of the body. In the modern era due to advance technology, one of the most pressing concern is regarding the given topic yoga. I shall explore the some from various aspects with my conception in the following paragraph.
on one side, there is a number of masses believe that yoga should be recommend as a particular subject in schools. It is mandatory for childrens because they think that yoga should be indulge the psychology of learners. Through the yoga classes creating competition in between all educatee.Students can using lot of tricks and talent for proving yourself as well as in this level all students wants to become more successful in comparative to others. For example: conduct the survey by Health Organization 20 schools were accepted the yoga as a subject in school.
contrary, a group of people is an opposing that the establishment yoga as a subject in education center. Parents believe their childs are demotivate during the yoga classes as well as competition. Another there are many problems they have to face like, student ignore their main subject , sometime parents are not capable to paid extra classes fee because a limited source are availble of earning money. In these situations psychology of learner would be fall down.
Nevertheless, weighing both views about yoga recoganizee as a subject in school. I believe that there is a simple conculsion yoga is a obligatory for students as a subject but it is depend upon student ; Which are decide yoga is helpful or harmful for yourself ?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, nevertheless, regarding, so, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9552238806 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80647623788 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600746268657 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3287486542 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.153846154 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84615384615 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190875690612 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723696248207 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468169971438 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10996307523 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422151713346 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.