One of most conspicuous trends to today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people believing that limit serious law breaking by juveniles ought to equally treated as grown-ups. In my opinion, this apprehension sounds me more rational and I will discuss this in following paragraphs.
To commence with, there are deluges of arguments in favor of this stance. The most preponderant one is to know that law serious for everyone. To elaborate it, when children treat equally for committing unhealthy activity, it will be a better way to teach them about that mistakes person had made and rules to society. It can not only contribute to reduce discrimination, but also leads to numerous other benefit in various field such as decline in illegal activities. Thanks to the wide range of advantages of punishing children in same way as adult offers,masses can enhance the productivity and quality of their lives much ease and efficiency by making ensure that law stand equally for everyone. Needless to say, all these merits stand in one stead, as far as augmenting their chances to prosperity and excellence is concerned.
Furthermore, another pivotal aspect of aforementioned proposition is that it is only likely to help one excel and thrive by crime is regardless of age. This is because, as soon as unlawful is punished, it makes possible to that there will serious not miss happening happen in future due to the fact they get information about the awful treatment of police again illegal. So, they never try to commit crime anymore. For instance, a study published by the government of Australia in March 2014 and April 2016, clearly indicate that 30% of illegitimate deceased in a number of nations those punished same way as person. Having said that why many are in favor of this viewpoint.
On the other hand, a section of society contradict above said view by providing a number of justification. The primary factor is that youngsters might be negatively influenced. To explain it, it is possible that when child gets same punishment as adult illegal, they may meet other adult prisons from where they can learn about advantage criminal method which may more dangerous society. Therefore, some are not agreed with above said viewpoint.
To conclude, having pondered over above stated it is crystal clear that providing same punishment to Juveniles is indeed too great to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 556, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , masses
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, for instance, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1997.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 398.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0175879397 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80568226703 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58040201005 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 644.4 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.3647605892 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.944444444 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1111111111 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72222222222 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181040897426 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.044977821868 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386179213434 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0858688989712 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0157983319818 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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