Some people believe that Young people who commit serious crimes should be punished in the same way as adults. Do you agree or disagree?
During the recent decades, the crime is more concerning spotlight compared to the past due to the unbalanced society. As a result, a proportion suggest that juvenile offenders should be penalized strictly as adult sentences. Personal judging, a sharp agreement is my point of view which are clarified in the given essays.
Firstly, based on the primary purposes of creating a prison system, the crime must be punished and trained intensely notwithstanding offenders among youngsters. In detail, by taking unfair advantage of legal policies for under-age lawbreakers, the juvenile may possess probabilities of committing minor crimes again such as shoplifting and robbery or even posing a serious threat to public when being releasing from the prison. Additionally, if criminals are not exactly judged during the process of experiencing a standard-training course as well as rehabilitation programs, they might engage in unlawful acts after returning to society, leading to the frequency of illegal activities. Consequently, the regulatory of government should be more stringent to youth wrongdoers.
Secondly, educational approaches have to be implemented into the operation of prison environment to explore to a optimizing extent of commitment. In detail, the probation and parole may fail to educate criminals effectively as the crime rate is sharply increasing. Furthermore, providing education and vocational training to 18-under prisoners helps correct moral and behavioral aspects, leading to limiting the recidivism. As a result, education is a appropriate method to transform juvenile delinquents into individual, who can contribute to the community.
To conclude, despite being sent to prison as adolescent crimes, the punishments of court officials should accurately correspond with equivalent crimes
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 3.0 24.0651302605 12% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1550.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.82706766917 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31607930126 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661654135338 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0486527234 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.166666667 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138991016791 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048069338375 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390369939211 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0853565403255 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353643683343 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.53 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.55 8.58950901804 134% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.