some people belive that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters(such as food ,clothes,entertainment )is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes.Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.
Disscuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is unquestionable true that today juvenile have very smart and sharp mind in their life.The root can that few masses say that kids have full right keep their decision in whole life rathen than any matters as well as food chain, clothes,
entertainment resources and so on.Actually, i am partially agree with this assertion.There are manifold reasons behind it.This essay would throw some light and an all aspects to see things in the right way.
The seeds and issue of multiheads.There most predominant Law has allowing 18 above adolescent must do anything in whole life because they have knowledge every thing such as study, career, fashion trend, film line, food and extra.After that,I think that it is no issuing for parents than adults can stand their decisions like any matters for life.In fact,children can share their experience to make their own selecting on everyday matters for parents.In addition,parent can happy and emotion my baby sharing every thing. Furthermore, parents should respecting children choices all in all kids might giving care, love and respect.
Moving on this under 18 children ,there is no denying the fact first and foremost, It is true that parent plays a vital role in kids life because they know that everything about the world baby would face that.Apparenlty,un18 teenager have unknowlegle about crime .For instance,murders,thief, rapes, human trafficking that 's why parents always take decision their on Child.Then,they can protect all the crime.
All said the done,I reckon on one hand 18 above juvenile acknowledge everything but they can speak about their decision for parents as far as parent might more happy to make decisions and kids told of us.On other hands under 18 teenager have no knowledge about anything that's that parents take choices everything relate to needs for children life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, furthermore, if, so, then, well, for instance, i reckon, i think, in addition, in fact, such as, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23232323232 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99957484319 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612794612795 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 59.0 20.2975951904 291% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 140.930337401 49.4020404114 285% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 310.8 106.682146367 291% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 59.4 20.7667163134 286% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 28.2 7.06120827912 399% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 5.01903807615 657% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167398993947 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891125810154 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464962066676 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0886571823456 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498391751501 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.9 13.0946893788 251% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 20.05 50.2224549098 40% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.1 11.3001002004 222% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.6 10.1190380762 253% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 10.7795591182 241% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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