In today’s medical sphere problem of testing medical supplies on living beings has become one of the pressing problem in that field. In the rest of the essay, it will discuss why there is a need for laboratory initial testing on animals in lieu of people while there is an opposite view especially from people who engaged in such organization like Greenpeace.
On the one hand, it might seem that testing on defenseless creatures are very cruel and totally incorrect activity. Moreover, it is unquestionable true that nobody can deprive or jeopardize someone’s life without regard whether it is human or another being. A recent study found that manually hundreds of millions of animals are used in science for different types of vivisection, let alone that fact that most of these experiments as result lead to injuries or even death of animals.
On the other hand, pharmacists acknowledge that this appalling measure is worth millions of safe human lives, which doctors would not have managed to safe if first testing of medicines were held on people. For instance, the human genome is similar to the chimpanzee on 98% this fact gives pharmacists a chance to taste an every treatment first on such animals and do not afraid that the effect on people will be different.
Taking everything into account, I hope that in the future scientists will discover the methods which will ensure to check all medical treatments without intervention in flora and consequently life of no one creature will not be vulnerable to risks or any hazards.
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- Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities.Others,however,say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.Discuss both views and give your own op 89
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- Some people belive that using animals to test the safety of human medicines is cruel and unwarranted, whereas others feel it is a medical necessity. Discuss both views and state your own opinion. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e vulnerable to risks or any hazards.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01550387597 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77716356409 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612403100775 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.9483145777 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.75 106.682146367 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.25 20.7667163134 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.625 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167263362396 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657943707288 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355254403822 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.090070017072 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505612659289 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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