Some people bilieve that professional workers such as doctors and teachers should be paid more than sport and entertainment personalities
Some think that the experienced workers like doctors and teachers should be paid high salary rather than those who work at sport and entertainment personalities. Although this measure is effective to some extent, I disagree with this point of view.
It is said that professions such as doctors or teachers are supposed to be paid more than athletics. Doctors and teachers must sometimes work late which puts some strength on them. As an illustration, nurses and surgeons must be ready for emergency accidents. Some car crashes may happen at night when people need medical services immediately. Secondly, both doctors and teachers deserve high salary because they graduate a 5-years-college which means they leave college with hundred thousand dollars of debt.
However plausible the aforementioned ideas may appear, I am in broad agreement with those who believe that sport players should also be gained considerable amount of salary for their efforts. First and foremost reason is that, their health can be under the danger while they are performing a particular kind of sport. According to the scientists, losing weight before competition in a short time may harm their health such as boxers, MMA fighters and footballers. Similarly, athletics can increase the reputation of country by winning and attending the kind of global competitions. As a result, it can create chances to improve the country’s finance too. Having considered these points, I am convinced that sportsmen make much more effort than doctors and teachers.
To conclude, although it is easy to think that sportsmen are improper for taking a lot of money, but giving much more money to doctors and teachers is still disadvantageous and deniable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, may, second, secondly, similarly, so, still, while, kind of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30656934307 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88345189797 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624087591241 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.927996418 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.857142857 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346397100277 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104507151621 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115057610105 0.0667982634062 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194285054106 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0905578529501 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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