Nowadays, most people prefer to eat healthy, so they have different kinds of diet. One of the most popular choice is vegetarianism, which is believed not only protect their personal health but also surroundings around them. This essay will discuss and compare this diet and their effects, in respectfully.
First of all, vegetarianism that means eating green without any meat and fish is becoming more and more popular for many people. Vegetarianism may depend on several things, such as the traditions of the country, the wealth of the country, the religion or the age group. Yet, the most common idea is that vegetables will more benefit people health, instead of meat and fish, because the most experiments suggest that meat is not healthy. For instance, meat includes more fats; therefore, it can occur several serious diseases, such as cardiovascular diseases, cancer and hypertension. However, like fruits and vegetables, vegatarian foods could be more easily digested by humans, and faster dissolve in nature. In addition, compared with the production of animal products, vegetarian products are cheaper and shorter. Finally, vegetarian people can believe that when they consume vegetarian products, they will help to maintain the balance between animals and humans.
On the other hand, there are several reasons to eat animal products. First of all, animals products, such as red meat, milk and fish include much more nutritional components. For example, meat gives us protein, which helps us to be stronger, and improve musles and bones. Also, fish is a rich source of omega3, which is necessary for human body. Apart from these, the consumption of animals products enhance daily resistance to diseases such as cold, cough. Moreover, because of staying away from meat and fish, vegetarians' immune system are lower and become ill with ease. Thus, they need to take vitamins' suppliments to improve their body. Finally, when people look at their development, it is seen that humanity is fed with meat and fish for a long time, and we need it in this is a natural formation.
In conclusion, overconsumption of everything is negative impact on human health and body. Therefore, in my opinion, people need to provide balance between their diet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 199, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding surroundings'?
Suggestion: the surrounding surroundings
... protect their personal health but also the surroundings around them. This essay will discuss and compare th...
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Line 3, column 684, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'faster' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: faster
... be more easily digested by humans, and more faster dissolve in nature. In addition, compar...
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Line 3, column 802, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'cheaper' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: cheaper
...nimal products, vegetarian products are more cheaper and shorter. Finally, vegetarian people...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1905.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20491803279 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70708226054 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562841530055 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4745532137 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.25 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201990085514 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594064351008 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372201380119 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119889426602 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323757356926 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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