Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the whole world as a whole.
Discuss this view and give your own opinion.
Eating as a vegetarian has become increasingly popular among certain demographics of society. These people claim that vegetarianism is beneficial not only for their own health but also for the whole world. This essay will argue why consuming meat and fish is entirely necessary despite some potential drawbacks.
Vegetarians have always considered planning their diets without products made from animals. They are justifiably worried about eating meat products with a variety of viruses, namely H1N1, MER, Hanta and Lassa, that could potentially make them sick. Moreover, it is a fact that meat production increases global warming. For example, if no one ate meat, there would be no food shortages, because it uses up food resources. These shreds of evidence have bolstered existing fears in vegetarians that having meat or fish in their diets are hazardous to their own health and society.
Despite the minor risks associated with eating meat products, the idea that it is unnecessary and dangerous is completely preposterous. Meat is considered to be a crucial part of the human diet as it provides our body with protein. In addition, an only-vegetable diet does not suit everybody because some people will lose their weights without brakes if their bodies do not absorb enough nutrients from meat or fish. Indeed, there have been some recorded instances of many vegetarians, without careful planning, are malnourished and lack of energy. Overall, the idea that vegetarianism plays an indispensable part in ensuring their good health and benefiting the world is partially true and ill-informed as it may lead to a far worse outcome for themselves.
This essay argued that people who support vegetarianism have a one-sided understanding of meat or fish and underestimate the positive effects of them. In my opinion, consuming meat products is an absolute imperative that is entirely justified despite the small and occasional risks involved.
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| 2019-08-06 | wardiati | 61 | view |
| 2019-05-12 | Bá Khánh Huyền | 89 | view |
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, for example, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1647.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36482084691 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92730413291 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596091205212 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9678539034 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.8 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4666666667 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86666666667 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302070656311 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.092480378302 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858781604905 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190276838879 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0850885383254 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.